Thursday, November 12, 2015

Noirvember - If on a Winter's Night - Page 12

1 - Pull back to focus on the entire scene.  Simon is still on the ground, Winston splayed partly next to and partly on top of him.  Amy stands next to the play, holding the (now very badly dented) garbage can.

NO COPY

2 - Amy drops the garbage can, stunned.  Simon pushes Winston's body off of him.

NO COPY

3 - Amy sits down in the snow.  Simon moves over to put his arm around her shoulders, attempting to comfort her.  Winston lies facedown in the snow, unmoving.

NO COPY

Onto page 13.

Start from the beginning.

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